Dear Mr. Dellovo,

I have a twenty year background in technology and sales which I am interested in applying toward brokering loans. I have been very successful in building businesses for many companies on the Internet. E-commerce and Internet marketing - without spamming - is my specialty. I wrote one of the first books on Internet Marketing. I am one of the best at it. I am also adept at telemarketing and I love to cold call businesses.

 From my research it does not appear any one bank or loan broker has harnessed the power of the Internet to create a pipeline of clients in the commercial field.

 I believe, if done right, loan brokering can afford a driven person like myself significant earnings and a flexible lifestyle (please correct me if I am mistaken). I have a fully equiped home office with multiple computers, multiple dedicated fax machines and unlimited outbound calling. I also have a toll free 800 number.

What I lack is in-depth knowledge of brokering loans, which is why I am contacting you. If I can benefit your company please let me know. I am being careful about aligning myself with a company with honesty and integrity as I want this to be a long term relationship which benefits both of us. I am interested in commission sales and have the means to support my family until I begin to derive significant commissions from my efforts. If I can make $100 on that first $10,000 loan I will be thrilled!

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Truly,
Marty Fox
Syosset, New York - about 40 minutes from Manhattan